Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Critical Speech Analysis


When I gave my speech I thought that I did pretty well. I thought that I projected my voice, made eye contact, and wasn’t as stiff as the speech I gave in WRD 110. I was hyper aware however of the pauses I took and hoped they weren’t too terribly awkward.
 After watching my speech I will have to say that I changed my mind and I noticed that all the things I thought I did okay or well were actually mildly horrible. One of the major problems I noticed was my lack of projection. My performance would have been greatly improved if I had spoken louder. I also thing my speech would’ve been improved if I had been less nervous. Because of my nerves I frequently lost my place with what I was saying despite all the practice and preparation I had done. Another thing I could’ve improved was my eye contact. I should have made it more deliberate.
Had I had more time I would have not only rehearsed more in front of others. I think that it could have improved my extreme awkwardness and stiffness. I also think that by practicing in front of others, they could have given me other advice and tips that I wouldn’t be able to see by practicing alone. If I had more time to prepare I would have worked more on my tone and speed. After watching the video I noticed that I talked really quickly.
One thing I think I did well was not having too many nervous ticks. I also think that I dressed in a way that was appropriate. I don’t think I came across stuck up for my topic or too laid back.

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